Express Train

I feel so great

I cannot think straight

But now I guess I am late

So my thoughts just have to wait

I really have to hurry

So my mom would not worry

I’ll take the train to get there

But must recall paying the fare

As the doors begin to open

I did not know what would happen

Swarms of people got through

Alongside me and you

The cart was crammed full

I looked like quite a fool

I was pushed to the back

And was nearly attacked

There were so many people around

That I could not even see the ground

It was really hard to breathe

And could only feel the heat

As the ride comes to a halt

I know that it is my fault

Cause the moment it stopped

I stumbled over a knapsack

I thought I have hit the wall

But something soft broke my fall

I could not believe what I’ve seen

For there was someone underneath

We were both in a daze

As I fell into your gaze

You left without a sound

But made my heart pound

I did see a glimpse of you

But did not have any clue

I would have said my apology

And even treated you nicely

As I pulled myself together

I managed to stifle my laughter

I got off and made a racket

Only to find a card in my pocket

I believed it belongs to you

When it fell after our rendezvous

It unveiled a number and place

With a name beside your face

I was really surprised to know

As I watch the hail of snow

To know that my bashful savior

Was indeed my next-door neighbor

But then I remembered everything

The reason why I am running

I hurried with all my might

To reach the room in sight

I arrived just in time

To hear the bells chime

While opening the dark door

To face the ordeal in store

~ by milkyway17 on June 16, 2009.

14 Responses to “Express Train”

  1. what a way to transform a moment into a very wonderful poetic way, are you really a poet that mysteriously manifested existence upon the earth from the heavens above..? Wow I can’t wait to read more, one after the other, and another, and another….

  2. sana magkaroon ka n ng libro mo, magiging bestseller yan s mga bookstore, hehehe, you are really blessed with such special talent, share nman ur talent, hehehe :D

  3. naks. ganda. natuwa aq. ok nman nah ih.

  4. WOW! napicture ko agad sa isip ko ung nangyayare habang binabasa ko….galing. Shift ka na sa AB

  5. nice! the poem isn’t just a mere piece to read… it let’s you wander through the story! keep it up!

  6. grabe galing keep it up. too many words to say to express for this kind of poetry.

  7. pwede ng pang movie ^^
    parang sa lrt lang na love story. hehe like it :)

    • hehehe natutuwa aq nung sinulat q yan e..^^ naisip q lng wat if mangyari kya ito sa lrt o mrt hahaha tnx^^

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