Express Train
I feel so great
I cannot think straight
But now I guess I am late
So my thoughts just have to wait
I really have to hurry
So my mom would not worry
I’ll take the train to get there
But must recall paying the fare
As the doors begin to open
I did not know what would happen
Swarms of people got through
Alongside me and you
The cart was crammed full
I looked like quite a fool
I was pushed to the back
And was nearly attacked
There were so many people around
That I could not even see the ground
It was really hard to breathe
And could only feel the heat
As the ride comes to a halt
I know that it is my fault
Cause the moment it stopped
I stumbled over a knapsack
I thought I have hit the wall
But something soft broke my fall
I could not believe what I’ve seen
For there was someone underneath
We were both in a daze
As I fell into your gaze
You left without a sound
But made my heart pound
I did see a glimpse of you
But did not have any clue
I would have said my apology
And even treated you nicely
As I pulled myself together
I managed to stifle my laughter
I got off and made a racket
Only to find a card in my pocket
I believed it belongs to you
When it fell after our rendezvous
It unveiled a number and place
With a name beside your face
I was really surprised to know
As I watch the hail of snow
To know that my bashful savior
Was indeed my next-door neighbor
But then I remembered everything
The reason why I am running
I hurried with all my might
To reach the room in sight
I arrived just in time
To hear the bells chime
While opening the dark door
To face the ordeal in store

what a way to transform a moment into a very wonderful poetic way, are you really a poet that mysteriously manifested existence upon the earth from the heavens above..? Wow I can’t wait to read more, one after the other, and another, and another….
I wouldn’t say that but thank you for the compliment^^
sana magkaroon ka n ng libro mo, magiging bestseller yan s mga bookstore, hehehe, you are really blessed with such special talent, share nman ur talent, hehehe
Well I don’t think I’m ready to write a book now.. I have a lot to learn^^
naks. ganda. natuwa aq. ok nman nah ih.
Thank you^^ I’m really happy that you liked it.
WOW! napicture ko agad sa isip ko ung nangyayare habang binabasa ko….galing. Shift ka na sa AB
Thank you^^ katuwa noh!
nice! the poem isn’t just a mere piece to read… it let’s you wander through the story! keep it up!
Thank you momi^^ San ka napadpad nung binabasa mo to? joke^^
grabe galing keep it up. too many words to say to express for this kind of poetry.
Thank you peng^^
pwede ng pang movie ^^
parang sa lrt lang na love story. hehe like it
hehehe natutuwa aq nung sinulat q yan e..^^ naisip q lng wat if mangyari kya ito sa lrt o mrt hahaha tnx^^